Writing Assignment Number 2: About My Mother
In this essay, I want to describe a person that is very important and dear to me,
my mother. My mother's name is Aliza and she is 46 years old. She has three daughters and one son, named Hila, Nitzan, Linoy and I. She works as an English teacher at Herzog High School for many years. She studied to be a teacher four years and teaches 25 years. She is very smart and funny, and I am proud to be her daughter.
Her physical description is very simple: she is not short or tall or fat or thin. She has short-curly hair and deep-brown eyes. Her hobbies are to read books or watch old movies. In her spare time, she likes to talk on the phone or talk with her daughters.
In my essay I have chosen to write about my mother because I like her very much, and she is very dear to me. I think that she is the closest person to me. I like to talk with her very much, and I would like to keep our deeper connection in the future.
Well done, Noa. This was short but to the point. You give a concise description of your mother, but also a clear an accurate one. I liked it.
Daphna.