Thursday, April 29, 2010

Applying For A Course

30 Halevi Street
Holon
7th October, 2010
New York University
4 Sweet Street
New York
USA
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Dear Sir/Madam,
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I saw your advertisement on the Internet. Therefore, I am writing this letter because I wish to apply for the admission to your school of Japenese studies next year.
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My name is Shulamit Levi and I am 22 years old. I have been interested in Japenese arts ever since I was a child. I have heard you specialize in this field and you are the only university that teaches that subject. In addition, some of your graduates recommended this course and said it is very interesting. I am currently a student at Bezalel School of Arts, however, my current school doesn't offer a course in this subject. I will be completing my studies next month and I would like to attend your cousres.
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So far, I have excelled in most subjects and I am attaching a letter of recommendation from the head of the art depatment. In addition, I enclose my final grades of the courses I have studied. It would be helpful if you provide me with specific details about the school's location and schedule. Moreover, I would be grateful if you send me all the necessary details about the admission requirements, an application form and the list of courses. In addition(ww. - try: Also), I would be glad if you send me details about the dorms at your university.
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I look forward to getting your letter promptly.
Thank you in advance.
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Sincerely Yours,
Shulamit Levi.
Excellent letter.
(100)
Daphna

Tuesday, April 20, 2010

A Letter to (the) Traveling Agency

30 Halevi Street
Holon
7th October, 2010
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The Travel Agency Manager
See the World Travel Agency
20 Mota Gur Street
New York
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Dear Sir/Madam,
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My name is Shulamit Levi and I am 24 years old. I have read about your agency on the Internet and I was very impressed. I have already been to the United States, however, this is the first organized trip I will go on. Thus, I expect a lot from your agency and I hope the trip will be great. Since I have no experience in this kind of trip, I would appreciate if you provide me with some necessary details about this tour.

First, I would like you to know that I am interested in visiting the country spectacular nature reserves and beautiful scenery, like the Appalachian Mountains and the Colorado Lake. Moreover, I am less interested in museums and other historical sites.

Second, I have few questions about the financial aspect of this tour. How much does this tour cost? Must I pay it in credit card? I heard from a friend that he couldn't pay for the tour in cheques, so I have a problem because I don't own one. Moreover, I would like to know in which hotels we will stay. Will the price include breakfast and dinner? Will the price include entrance fee for all the sites we will visit? Last but not least, will you have trips for ten days in September?

To conclude, I hope that this trip will be enjoyable and will meet my expectations. I will grateful if you answer my questions as soon as possible.

I look forward to your prompt reply,
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Sincerely yours,
Shulamit Levi.
Great!
(95)
Daphna

Wednesday, April 7, 2010

Formal Letter - 3.

11 Halevi street
Tel Aviv
April 5th 2010


The Station Manager
Lev Hamedina Radio Station
4 Hanadiv street
Tel Aviv

Dear Sir/ Madam,

It has been advertised that you are planning to produce a series of one hour radio programs for teenagers and I would like to suggest that you produce programs that deal with problems teenagers have.

To begin with, your idea of producing programs for adolescents is very beneficial. Therefore, I suggest you devote those programs to deal with various problems they have. Teenagers will come up with questions or problems they have and you will bring a psychologist, a doctor and other necessary experts to provide them with suitable answers/solutions. Thus, they will have the possibility to ask any question they want and get the best answer.

In addition, it is very important to keep the names of the people who ask questions anonymous so that people will feel free. It would be helpful to tell listeners to ask about any subject they want and guarantee their voice will be distorted so they won't be recognized. As a teenager I know how valuable this program can be. I am sure many other teenagers agree with me. We hear about many sad cases young people make mistakes because they have no one to turn to .Sometimes those mistakes are fatal.

To conclude, in light of the above, I strongly believe that if you produce such programs, you will help a lot of young listeners.


Sincerely Yours,
Noa Cohen.

(95)
Daphna.